Story Extract- Part 2!

Hi again! Are you super excited for this post? Because I am!! It's the second part of my… STORY EXTRACT! Now if your new here -and really confused- then why don't you go check out my first extract and then come back to this one! So then, after this post, we can all settle down for a hot chocolate, cookies and some Netflix. But before all that, I want to announce who figured out which blogger I was from my previous post! It was... MISS INTERNET AND MORNINGTIME4 for correctly guessing that I was The Content Compleation! A very big well done to you guys! Don't worry if you didn't get it as it was a very hard challenge! Ok, so now that's all cleared up we can charge into action!

The horrified girl with the given name turned slowly on her heel, praying with all her might. It couldn't be him, could it? Her breathing seemed to have increased and she felt as if someone was plunging her head into shapeless water. By every second terror was filling her quickening heart. What was she going to do? She finally summed up enough courage to turn around and meet the face of a stranger. The girl suddenly took a huge, relived breath, only to be plunged back into water again. Suprisingly, he knows my name. How does he know my name? She began to step forward, intending to unravel the mysterious mans identity by getting a glimpse of him only be met with a tight lipped 
"Don't move a muscle." 
His voice (she knew it was a male judging by his deep tone) was strong yet somewhat elegant as if he was someone who belonged in a higher standard. But his voice wasn't going to get in the way of her finding out who this arrogant outsider is. 
"Please tell me who you are! I just want to know!" 
"I can't tell you," replied the man, " but I can tell you that I want you to come with me." 
"I can't" 
"Then I'll have to drag you there"  
And his hand locked firmly around her arm.

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-PenGirl